Academic Paper Review & Rephrase

I need my academic manuscript polished so that every sentence reads smoothly and meets formal scholarly standards. The task is straightforward: work through the entire text, flag anything that sounds awkward, correct grammar or punctuation slips, and re-phrase passages where clarity, precision, or academic tone can be improved. All terminology, citations, and data must stay intact; only the wording should change when necessary.

Please return two files:
• a version with tracked changes or comments so I can see every revision, and
• a clean, publication-ready copy.

An eye for logical flow, consistency in tense and voice, and adherence to conventional academic style (APA, MLA, Chicago—match whatever you find in the draft) will be appreciated.