Thesis Structure and Argument Feedback -- 2

I need detailed feedback on my thesis, focusing on structure, plot, and arguments. The goal is to prepare it for publication or journal submission.

Key Requirements:
- Academic or professional writing expertise
- Strong grasp of thesis structure and argumentation
- Experience with publication standards and journal submissions

Ideal Skills:
- Advanced degree in relevant field
- Proven track record in thesis editing
- Excellent communication skills for clear, actionable feedback