Rewrite Kids' Non-Fiction Storybook

I have a short, informal non-fiction storybook written for children that now needs a fresh set of eyes. I’m happy with the overall concept, but the manuscript could read more smoothly and pack a little extra sparkle for young readers.

Here’s what I’m after:
• A careful proofread to catch typos, punctuation slips, and any awkward phrasing.
• A light rewrite where needed so the language feels lively, age-appropriate, and consistently informal without losing the facts or the friendly tone.
• Clear, tracked edits in Word (or Google Docs if you prefer) so I can review every change, plus a clean version ready for layout.

Please keep the structure intact—chapter order, headings, and illustrations cues stay as they are—but feel free to tweak sentence flow, adjust vocabulary for readability, and flag anything that might confuse a young audience.

If you’ve polished children’s non-fiction before, I’d love to see a sample. Turnaround is flexible within the next week or two; quality comes first.