Revise Ninja Fantasy Action Screenplay

My current feature-length ninja fantasy script already has the core plot beats and set pieces on the page, but the story rhythm and character work still feel uneven. I need a screenwriter who can dive in, shake up the structure where it drags, and return a tighter, more emotionally resonant draft.

Here’s what matters most to me:
• Story restructuring and development are the top priority. I’m open to shifting scenes, combining characters, or re-ordering acts if it heightens tension and flow.
• Every central character needs sharper definition. Please expand backstories and motivations, map clear arcs and growth, and ensure relationships and interactions land with real weight.
• Three thematic threads must stand out organically in the rewrite—honor and loyalty, betrayal and revenge, and an ultimate sense of self-discovery and redemption. Each should feel earned, not forced.

I’ll supply the current draft (Final Draft and PDF) plus a short synopsis that outlines my intent for tone and rating. You’ll send back:
1. A fully revised screenplay in Final Draft (.fdx) and PDF formats.
2. A concise scene-by-scene outline explaining the structural changes and any new beats.
3. Page-specific notes on character polish, dialogue tweaks, and theme placement so I can track the evolution.

Industry formatting is non-negotiable. If we collaborate smoothly, there’s room to stay on through later polishing passes. Let me know your turnaround time and a quick sample of similar action-fantasy work so I can gauge fit.