Polish My Fiction Prose

I’ve finished drafting a memoor and now need an editor who can dive in at the line level. I’m not after big-picture plot advice or basic proofreading; instead, I’m looking for detailed feedback that will smooth out the writing, sharpen the voice, and boost overall clarity and flow.

Key focus areas for your review
• Descriptions, setting, and atmosphere
• Sentence flow, word choice, and readability

What I’d like back is an annotated Word document (Track Changes on) plus a short summary letter that highlights recurring patterns and practical next-step suggestions. If you enjoy tuning prose so that each sentence sings, I’d love to hear how you’d approach this project and see a brief sample of similar work you’ve completed.