Polish Horror Script Character Arcs

My feature-length horror screenplay is finished, but it needs a professional eye before it goes out to producers. The pages are already written; what I need now is a top-to-bottom proofread, industry-standard formatting, and—most importantly—a sharpened focus on character development.

I’m specifically concerned with the strength of each character arc. I have detailed notes that chart how the main players should evolve scene-by-scene; you’ll use those notes as a roadmap, tightening motivations, clarifying turning points, and ensuring every scare or revelation lands because the characters earn it. Dialogue can stay mostly intact as long as the arc feels truthful.

While polishing structure and flow is welcome, the headline deliverable is a clean, submission-ready draft that showcases compelling, believable evolution for every key role. Final Draft or a compatible format is preferred so my notes and your changes remain trackable.

Deliverables:
• One fully proofread and correctly formatted screenplay file (Final Draft .fdx and PDF)
• A brief margin-comment or end-note summary explaining the adjustments made to each character arc

Once complete, I’ll be ready to move straight into pitching, so accuracy and narrative punch are vital.