Expand Sales Email Copy

We have a 400-word sales email that already outlines the offer, headline, and basic call-to-action, but it feels more like a teaser than a full conversation. We want that same piece developed into a rich, 1,000-word email that speaks directly to prospective customers and nudges them to raise their hand for more information.

The objective is lead generation, so every section should guide readers toward clicking the primary CTA or replying to start a dialogue. I’m looking for a casual, persuasive voice—think friendly expert rather than hard-sell copy—while still weaving in urgency, clear benefits, and social proof.

You’ll receive the current draft plus a short background sheet on the product, target persona, and any testimonials we can quote. Feel free to reshape the structure, add storytelling hooks, objections/answers, and multiple micro-CTAs so the message stays engaging all the way through.

Deliverables
• A polished email of 1,000–1,100 words in Google Docs or Word, ready to paste into our ESP
• Two subject-line options and one preview-text line that align with the new copy
• Final piece must retain our brand voice, read smoothly aloud, and be plagiarism-free

If this sounds like your kind of project, let’s talk timing and any quick questions you have once you’ve seen the draft.

Note.Last week we listed this same job on freelancer , we awarded it to a writer , he completed the work to our satisfaction , no faults and we paid him in full , we are re-advertising it again simply because we want a another version as well, the cost will be $50.00 aud , we do not use , word , messenger , telegram , whats app etc , the script MUST come to us in plain text and we must be able to download it .
we has the requied sales copy in 400 words , we want it expanded to at least 1000 words.