English Editor - Rewriting

I have a complete academic thesis that reads clearly enough in parts but still feels clunky and repetitive at the sentence level. What I need is a careful, sentence-by-sentence rewrite—every line throughout the entire manuscript—so the ideas remain exactly the same while the language becomes smoother, more concise, and unmistakably academic in tone.

You may correct small grammar, spelling, and punctuation slips as you go, yet the primary task is to recast each sentence for clarity and flow without introducing new content or altering meaning. Please keep terminology, citations, and structure intact.

Deliverables
• One Word document with Track Changes showing every rewritten sentence
• One clean, final document ready for submission

If you are used to refining scholarly work—MA or PhD level—and can preserve nuance while elevating style, I’d love to work with you.