Beta Read Australian Crime Novel

I have an 80,000-word Australian crime manuscript ready for a fresh set of eyes. I’d like you to read it from start to finish and give me candid, constructive feedback that focuses on plot and structure. Please pay particular attention to the pacing—let me know where the momentum flags, where it races ahead effectively, and if it flags at any point.

I’m not asking for a line-by-line edit or deep dives into character arcs or prose style; general comments on those areas are welcome only if something leaps out as helping or hindering the plot flow. What I really need is an objective assessment of how the story hangs together: logic of the investigation, placement of twists, clarity of stakes, and overall narrative cohesion.

Deliverables
• A short overview (1–2 pages) highlighting the strengths and any structural or pacing issues.
• In-document notes (Word Track Changes or PDF comments) marking specific spots where tension drops or structure feels off.
• A final summary list of any major plot inconsistencies you notice.

If you’ve beta-read crime or thriller fiction before—or have editorial experience in the genre—that’s a plus. Turnaround within three weeks would be ideal, but let me know if you need a bit longer.

You must either live in Australia or have lived here in the past.